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female wip

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in the pipeline
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I think it is very hard to critique something so early in the game. But there is one thing that stands out to my eyes, and it only actually matters if you aren't intentionally doing it.

When you look at the highlights on the front of her body, the highlight that hits her breast and torso do not match the same tones and shades of the highlights on her left arm. The highlight on her arm is a much cooler tone than the former. Just an observation, but like I said... incredibly hard to critique something that is just beginning. I would very much like to see the end product, so I'll be watching <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

I like the pose, the values and the blending. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> Keep it up!
(i dont like rating this unfinished, so don't take them too seriously)